Commenting

This week for commenting, I commented on chrise's writing blogpost because I thought his blogpost was really interesting to read and also because he had lots of information in his DLO. In his DLO he included facts about what emotive language was and how it connects to persuasive writing. In my comment I said "His chris. I have read your blogpost and I think it is really interesting. I have don a DLO slimier to yours. What did you have to do to create this blogpost? Keep up the good work.

Commenting

This week I commented on Victoria's trip to ripper rugby trip because she had a lot of information but no paragraphs. I commented "Hello Victoria. I really enjoyed your DLO. I have don the same DLO before. Just remember to write in paragraphs. How did you do this much sentences keep up the good work

Commenting

This week I decided to comment on Fau's reading blog post. She had lots of detail in her blurb but not so much in her DLO. She had the questions that people would usaully ask and had a great summary in her DLO.  She really had a interesting blurb to read. But some of her words said the exact same thing on her DLO.

I think she should of worked on putting interesting words in her DLO to make it look amazing to read. The questions she asked was really detailed. Her pictures were really interesting and went with her DLO.

Commenting on Pua's key/hand must do

This week I decided to comment on Pua's key/hand must do. I commented on Pua's key/hand must do because he had a photo up but not enough sentences to give people an idea of what you did and what you are saying. He pointed out the things you had to do on this and he showed us the level he was clicking on. He had an LI which said To do typing mat. I said he might need to put a little bit more writing down just to give people an idea of what you are talking about.

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