This week I decided to comment on Fau's reading blog post. She had lots of detail in her blurb but not so much in her DLO. She had the questions that people would usaully ask and had a great summary in her DLO. She really had a interesting blurb to read. But some of her words said the exact same thing on her DLO.
I think she should of worked on putting interesting words in her DLO to make it look amazing to read. The questions she asked was really detailed. Her pictures were really interesting and went with her DLO.
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