Commenting

This week for commenting i decided to write on Raera's kiwi sport blog post because she had a great learning intention and she was putting all the skills that she learnt into her blurb to. I like how she put her coaches name instead of coach. I really thought she should of went and read her blog post before she published because there was a lot of miss pelt words. Other then that her blurb was really interesting because she had her coaches name, what she learnt and how they learnt it.

Here is her blog: Swimming

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